This would of been are first scene, but after filming we believed that we should change the scene because it did not go according to our plot and we gave too much away. Furthermore, when I fell on the floor, it was too theatrical and it would sway the plot of the film.The opening scene did not meet the conventions of a pyschological thriller because there were far too many charcters involved, normally there is 1-2, but in this scene, there were 3-4.We uploaded the film into youtube and the comments we received was:

mediag321coursework

The trip seems abit to comical and slightly unreal but however comparing that characters clothing to the female charcters he does seem isolated from society. as well this there are 2 many characters introduced within the opening where its hard to work out who is the main character and most important.

genieabbott

its a bit comical the fall because like he kicked the metal thing before hahaa and its a bit over dramatic
the comedy doesnt really fit into the conventions of a psychological thriller